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i go to theme park with parents.
i eat hamburger.
Father buy animal toy
im hot and tired, it funny.
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i go to theme park with parents.
I went to the theme park with my parents.
The first letter of the first word in a sentence should be in capital letter.
"Went" is the past tense of "go", because the topic is about what you did in the past (last weekend).
"My" will mean that you went with your parents, instead of some other parents..
i eat hamburger.
I ate a hamburger.
Remember that "ate" is the past tense of "eat".
Don't forget the article "a" when writing about a noun (in this case, "hamburger").
Father buy animal toy
Father bought me a toy animal
Punctuation is important, it lets the reader know when the sentence ends. So don't forget your dot (".")
"Bought" is the past tense of "buy".
im hot and tired, it funny.
It was hot and tiring, but it was fun!
It's better to describe how the day felt in general. "Funny" is something that makes us laugh, like a joke.
Different punctuation marks can give sentences different meanings An exclamation point ("!") means that you really feel strongly about your sentence.
The day was hot and tiring, but I had a lot of fun!
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